CRITICAL INVESTIGATION: Action plan and targets - mr bush

Action plan and targets:
- To start making adjustments on the first draft
- Make a start on the second draft
- Ensure that I use the feedback in order to ensure my work it at a higher level
- Proofread and check through the critical investigation.

WWW:
- Well written
- Fair amount of detail
- Explained the representations of black music and compared it to other types of music
- Used some teory
- good use of research used to back up your explanation
- Refers back to question tittle

EBI:
- More theory such as
* Alverado: Pittied, Humerous, Dangerous, Exotic
* Mulvey?
* Audience theories
- Book quotes are needed
- Media language
- Use theories such as stereotypes when giving the explanation